It was a far cry from the wail that finished off
any love I felt for the town
that nestled between drowning rivers
and the place where the white hart died
centuries before, running out of steam
on pastured land and from where
a rotten borough took place;
gentle snoozing town,
I was out of place, despite having
the strongest of connections
in a cottage in Peter’s Finger.
This hamlet market town, the piper of county
thought and woe betide country way,
never step out of place,
that was the Wiltshire outlook,
set deep in the required manners
and yet one that would see the boy die
as he gasped his last,
perhaps had a nicer start,
for I first heard Axl Rose
come out
of the Juke Box on Castle Street
and for a brief moment
as the strains of the debut filled
the road side,
I found myself thinking, perhaps
this won’t be bad…
this won’t be too bad,
I can always leave
and leave I had to do
for in that appetite to find a belonging,
I could have been planted anywhere
and I would not have heard
that scream.
Ian D. Hall 2017